On Saturday I went to hello hornby it was at wycola park when I went there i saw Elijah and Zander then me and zander went to go find mrs Thorp 5 minutes later we saw mrs Thorp and
All the choir kids went in a line to small to biggest then we all went on the stage then we sang the weller man .
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ReplyDeleteI live in Islington and I could hear the singing from my house.It was very loud but I enjoyed listening to it while I did the garden.
Well done for getting up in public and performing.
What other things did you do there?.
Nice ideas in your writing Bless. Check capitals for names.
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