We have been learn to write recount in the style of a newspaper reporter.s
Last Saturday the local lighthouse went out. A ship almost crashed on the rocks.
One day the villagers were having a party because it was Christmas. Mr Bob, the lighthouse keeper, thought the villagers were loud so he shut the window when he was doing his
paperwork. Then the lighthouse went out. Mr Bob grabbed his tool box and ran up the sairs. When he was there Mr Bob put his
tool box down to grab the top of the light bulb. He walked slowly to put it down but he forgot the tool box was behind him and he tripped over.
Meanwhile a ship was coming. The captain was worried when the lighthouse went out. “I thought it was scary when the lighthouse went out because I couldn't see where I was going. “ said the Captain.
One of the villagers found out the lighthouse went out and he told everyone and they grabbed their lanterns and went around the lighthouse. They saved the ship crashing on the rocks.
What made me want to read more of your article Bless,was that you gave the lighthouse keeper a name.
ReplyDeleteI also liked that you told us how the Captain was feeling.
I'm glad that the boat wasn't wrecked and that everyone worked together to make sure it didn't crash.
I hope you have a wonderful holiday.