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Friday, June 11, 2021

Aliens









                                                       I am on an alien spaceship. I don’t know how I got here.

It is dark. But I can feel the spaceship shaking. And the aliens are talking when they are  eating a dead human  body on a huge table. 


I can see the alien's face with no eyes with black skin and  with red dark blood on his nails. In the spaceship there are blue lights in the dark in the killing room.


I am  looking out the window for any danger outside the aliens spaceship. There is a black hole coming towards the spaceship. Suddenly the aliens are going to the black hole when I got there the spaceship is breaking apart….I guess this is the end.



5 comments:

  1. I'm glad that there was no more to read Bless....your story was scary!
    I hope that when the aliens were eating that they weren't talking at the same time-that's quite rude.

    I like the use of your describing words.Keep up the interesting writing.

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    1. thank you Mrs Cassidy for commenting to my writing.

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  2. I agree with Mrs Cassidy Bless. It is very scarey. You have written a great descriptive piece of writing, ka pai! Do you think real aliens would be friendly or unfriendly?

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  3. I like Bless rating keep it up

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  4. Hello Bless.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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