on your mark get set bang! I dive into the ocean and I jumped over the first hurdles' and second. My number 42 is wining then there was lot of fishy and 41 and 43 was catching up I run and jumping over the hurdles. then I won the end.
on you mark get set bang! I dive into the ocean and I jumped over the first hurdles'
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What a great start Bless.You used some good ideas.
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Well done on winning the race.