Me and Elijah found a haunted house we went inside. There were dark stairs made of brick. I went up the stairs,
It lead to a scary room, I called to Elijah to come. I looked in the room there was a coffin in there. I heard a zombie inside. I told Elijah to destroy it, he grabbed the sword from the closet. The zombie was breaking out of the coffin. Elijah quickly stabbed the zombie in the head so we ran downstairs and quickly went out of the house. The end.
You always have great ideas Bless. Your writing is often short but good quality. I would love to see you plan and develop ideas so you have maybe a few more paragraphs. Well done.
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